Thank you. It is a nice draft. Among the issues discussed, in my humble opinion, the most important ones are how to reduce food waste (as championed by France), and how to reduce negative impact of food production.
Most of the crop-based food production are Greening activities consuming Carbon, despite some negative issues, like pesticides and others. Hence if food production can be made Greener, it will serve dual purpose.
AMM Zowadul Karim Khan