Thanks for the opportunity to contribute. in the attached, I've added brief suggestions about the value of:
- highlighting information (including specific statistics) about links between nutrition and economic productivity
- highlighting the role of (shifting) seasonality in food systems
- highlighting the importance of fisheries and aquaculture, including in specific areas (climate change, school feeding): “Fish is a vital source of nutrition and feeds more than 1 billion consumers to whom ﬁsh is a key component of their diets.” (World Bank, FAO, WorldFish, ARD. 2012: xviii)
- including a sub-section on water security for food systems. This could highlight the recommendations on Water for Food Security and Nutrition which were endorsed by the CFS.