السيد Geoff Tansey
Creating a 'virtual academy' of keynote talks on transforming food systems as an open education resource as part of my work promoting fair and sustainable food systems. For more details see my website www.tansey.org.uk
Creating a 'virtual academy' of keynote talks on transforming food systems as an open education resource as part of my work promoting fair and sustainable food systems. For more details see my website www.tansey.org.uk
Better than the first draft but it still avoids a single clear target date for achieving the aims laid out. 13f does refer to an action plan that by implication will have such dates and targets, however, I think one is needed in this document – see below.
Para 10e does not read clearly to me. 10 finishes ‘and that’:
e begins with ‘while etc etc”, either delete the ‘while’ and just list the points made in the rest of e or if keeping the ‘while’ then there needs to be something more added at the end of e
Suggest 11c should read
global and national policy coherence is needed among relevant sectors, including in trade and investment agreements to ensure they do not undermine governments’ ability to act in the public interest in promoting food and nutrition security, and in investments, incentives and constraints for agricultural production, food processing and distribution;
Commitment a): eradicate hunger and all forms of malnutrition, particularly to eliminate stunting, wasting and overweight in children under 5 and anemia in women; eliminating undernourishment and reversing rising trends in obesity;
Add a date by which this is to be achieved so you can be held to account in monitoring progress and developing the framework for action mentioned in f. Suggest this date be no later than 2025.
السيد Geoff Tansey
Hi,
Please find attached a two responses - one sharing a resource (which might be able to be a partner, I’m not sure), the other my comments on the draft.
Please confirm receipt and do let me know if you have any queries,
Cheers,
Geoff