All types and some causes of malnutrition were described in paragraph 2, while the emergency and political situation were not mentioned as important factors affecting the nutrition and health status especially in the developing countries.
need more clarification on the practical methods to address all food system and preventive components in the developing countries. For instance in paragraph 9, how to ensure the sustainability of nutrition requirements?
In Paragraph 12, what you mean by different situations
The governments in the conflict areas are not stable and their commitments stay on paper only therefore strong statements and practical points should be highlighted and highly recommended for the fragile states.