Please find my comments in the attached comment form.
This document is a good start. However, I would like to see the concepts more clearly defined, and more attention to health systems, equity, social safety nets and poverty reduction, in addition to food systems. The commitments as stated are too vague to lead to operational strategies.
Thank you for giving us the opportunity to react.
Hélène Delisle, Ph.D.
Professeur titulaire et directeur de TRANSNUT
Centre collaborateur OMS sur la transition nutritionnelle et le développement
(WHO Collaborating Centre on Nutrition Changes and Development),
Département de nutrition, Faculté de Médecine
Pavillon Liliane-Stewart, Université de Montréal
CP 6128 succ. Centre-ville,
Montréal Qc Canada H3C 3J7